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Post by adventure780 on Jun 28, 2006 0:04:18 GMT -5
Inspired by 24. Seriously, all I have seen is all this sad stuff, In this show, the characters, Tony and Michelle had just started to get back on track with their relationship. Okay this is my version of what went through his head as he died. Michelle died before him, in case you are familiar with this show. I watched Tony's death scene and was inspired. Also inspired by the song Savin' Me. Note: Also posted on Offically Addicted where my sn is saturn567.
Without You Baby I lost you just when we got back on track. I miss you so much. Sorry I couldn't save you. The awful memories of the day I lost you, are fresh in my mind. The pain isn't going away. My time has come to come up to Heaven. I am hoping that you'll forgive for not avenging your death. I'm hoping you'll welcome me up there with open arms. This life is nothing without you. Can't bear to spend another day without you. I'm coming now baby. Don't you worry, The next time around we'll be together again. This time it will be forever. I promise you, That will get all better, Cause this time I won't let you go.
Heaven Gates opened
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Post by adventure780 on Jun 28, 2006 0:05:07 GMT -5
Okay this one is more of hopeful one, to cheer up the mood from the last one. What if they had survived? Really I adore ending that are filled with hope. So if I was writing for the show..
Another Day Together The car bomb exploded. He rushed outside, He feared he's lost her forever. Fortunately there she was alive. Standing still, in shock. He rushed up to her and pulled her away from the wreckage. Tears of relief were shed. They had another day together. He held her in his arms in what seemed like forever. Another close call had came and went. All that mattered that they had another day to be happy and enjoy life to the fullest.
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Post by Bauer Power on Jun 28, 2006 10:36:18 GMT -5
those are very good, how long did it take for you to write them?
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Post by adventure780 on Jun 28, 2006 13:36:32 GMT -5
Not long. Stories take me longer. Thanks for the comment! ;D
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Post by Bauer Power on Jun 28, 2006 15:47:06 GMT -5
Your welcome. Have you finished any stories yet?
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Post by adventure780 on Aug 28, 2006 17:22:51 GMT -5
Precious Moments
Those precious moments when you wake up, Share hugs and kisses with your family Then you head out for the day.
Chorus: Don't forget those precious moments. You don't know if you will ever feel the same again.
This day's events shall determine whether you live to see tomorrow. For moment you think the worst is over. Then it goes all wrong again.
Chorus: Don't forget those precious moments. Who knows if you shall have them again.
You think you are dying, Then suddenly back-up arrives in the nick of time. You live to see another day, Cause someone arrived between the precious moments of life and death.
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Post by adventure780 on Aug 28, 2006 17:25:07 GMT -5
Thiis poem is also posted on other boards with different pennames.
Inspired by 24
Just Want to Go Home
This is our duty. We are supposed to fight the bad guys. Then why are we trapped here? I want to get out of this mess. We should have been more precise with plan. Look what has happened now!
Chorus: Just want to go home. Forget this horrible day!
Is it wrong to want to feel safe and warm? I just want to get out here. Hate not being in control Anything could happen, at any moment. Come let us get out of here!
Chorus: Take me away from here. Just want to go home, where I'll safe at last.
Don't like the opposition having the advantage Let us beat them, the can we just go home? Where everything is a comfort compared to this strange and horrible situation that we have stumbled into.
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Post by Bauer Power on Aug 31, 2006 23:18:50 GMT -5
nice poems, you should add music and make them into songs.
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Post by adventure780 on Sept 1, 2006 23:10:07 GMT -5
Too bad I'm not really muisical. Well I do know someone who plays the violin, maybe they can help me out. ;D
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Post by adventure780 on Nov 3, 2006 23:03:51 GMT -5
Okay got a few more.
Inspired by the 24 video, And it Feels Like
Was it Ever Real?
I look over at you, I wonder why you don't feel the way I do. Don't you feel like there is something left unsaid between us. We separated so suddenly I sometimes wonder.
Chorus: Was it ever real?
Then I go through old boxes, I find the letters you used to write but never mail to me. Sometimes I wonder, Had all it been a dream?
Chorus: Was it ever real?
Then I see you turn and look at me. There is a glint of a look in your eyes that reminds me of the good old days, when we were really together. Wish we could fix things and move on from the hurdles of the past.
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